Tutorial patch

[catagits/Catalyst-Manual.git] / lib / Catalyst / Manual / Tutorial / Authorization.pod

diff --git a/lib/Catalyst/Manual/Tutorial/Authorization.pod b/lib/Catalyst/Manual/Tutorial/Authorization.pod
index d0ca866..d340d20 100644 (file)
--- a/lib/Catalyst/Manual/Tutorial/Authorization.pod
+++ b/lib/Catalyst/Manual/Tutorial/Authorization.pod
@@ -93,7 +93,7 @@ Edit C<lib/MyApp.pm> and add C<Authorization::Roles> to the list:
 
 B<Note:> As discussed in MoreCatalystBasics, different versions of 
 C<Catalyst::Devel> have used a variety of methods to load the plugins. 
-You put the plugins in the C<use Catalyst> statement if you prefer.
+You can put the plugins in the C<use Catalyst> statement if you prefer.
 
 
 =head2 Add Config Information for Authorization
@@ -311,7 +311,7 @@ C<__PACKAGE__-E<gt>setup> statement:
             "/books/form_create_do",
             [qw/admin/],
         );
-    __PACKAGE__->deny_access_unless(
+    __PACKAGE__->allow_access_if(
             "/books/delete",
             [qw/user admin/],
         );
@@ -320,9 +320,10 @@ Each of the three statements above comprises an ACL plugin "rule".  The
 first two rules only allow admin-level users to create new books using
 the form (both the form itself and the data submission logic are
 protected).  The third statement allows both users and admins to delete
-books.  The C</books/url_create> action will continue to be protected by
-the "manually configured" authorization created earlier in this part of
-the tutorial.
+books; letting users delete but not create book entries may sound odd in
+the "real world", but this is just an example.  The C</books/url_create>
+action will continue to be protected by the "manually configured"
+authorization created earlier in this part of the tutorial.
 
 The ACL plugin permits you to apply allow/deny logic in a variety of
 ways.  The following provides a basic overview of the capabilities:
@@ -412,7 +413,7 @@ is inside an C<IF> statement that only displays the list to
 admin-level users.)  If you log in as C<test01> you should be able to
 view the C<form_create> form and add a new book.
 
-When you are done, use one of the 'Logout' links (or go to the
+Use one of the 'Logout' links (or go to the
 L<http://localhost:3000/logout> URL directly) when you are done.