RT #64087: typos

[catagits/Catalyst-Manual.git] / lib / Catalyst / Manual / Tutorial / 04_BasicCRUD.pod

diff --git a/lib/Catalyst/Manual/Tutorial/04_BasicCRUD.pod b/lib/Catalyst/Manual/Tutorial/04_BasicCRUD.pod
index 39d3413..0a15e59 100644 (file)
--- a/lib/Catalyst/Manual/Tutorial/04_BasicCRUD.pod
+++ b/lib/Catalyst/Manual/Tutorial/04_BasicCRUD.pod
@@ -377,7 +377,7 @@ to something along the lines of the following:
     | /books/url_create/*/*/*             | /books/url_create                    |
     '-------------------------------------+--------------------------------------'
 
-C<url_create> has disappeared form the "Loaded Path actions" section
+C<url_create> has disappeared from the "Loaded Path actions" section
 but it now shows up under the newly created "Loaded Chained actions"
 section.  And the "/*/*/*" portion clearly shows our requirement for
 three arguments.
@@ -886,7 +886,7 @@ query parameter:
     ...
     <div id="content">
         [%# Status and error messages %]
-        <span class="message">[% status_msg || c.request.params.status_msg %]</span>
+        <span class="message">[% status_msg || c.request.params.status_msg | html %]</span>
         <span class="error">[% error_msg %]</span>
         [%# This is where TT will stick all of your template's contents. -%]
         [% content %]
@@ -904,7 +904,10 @@ C<E<lt>span class="message"E<gt>> line.
 Point your browser to L<http://localhost:3000/books/list> (you should 
 now be able to safely hit "refresh" in your browser). Then delete the 
 remaining copy of "TCPIP_Illustrated_Vol-2". The green "Book deleted" 
-status message should return. 
+status message should return.  But notice that you can now hit the
+"Reload" button in your browser and it just redisplays the book
+list (and it correctly shows it without the "Book deleted" message
+on redisplay).
 
 B<NOTE:> Another popular method for maintaining server-side
 information across a redirect is to use the C<flash> technique we
@@ -935,8 +938,8 @@ Let's add two columns to our existing C<books> table to track when
 each book was added and when each book is updated:
 
     $ sqlite3 myapp.db
-    sqlite> ALTER TABLE book ADD created INTEGER;
-    sqlite> ALTER TABLE book ADD updated INTEGER;
+    sqlite> ALTER TABLE book ADD created TIMESTAMP;
+    sqlite> ALTER TABLE book ADD updated TIMESTAMP;
     sqlite> UPDATE book SET created = DATETIME('NOW'), updated = DATETIME('NOW');
     sqlite> SELECT * FROM book;
     1|CCSP SNRS Exam Certification Guide|5|2010-02-16 04:15:45|2010-02-16 04:15:45
@@ -987,9 +990,9 @@ B<above> the C<1;> on the last line):
     #
     __PACKAGE__->add_columns(
         "created",
-        { data_type => 'datetime', set_on_create => 1 },
+        { data_type => 'timestamp', set_on_create => 1 },
         "updated",
-        { data_type => 'datetime', set_on_create => 1, set_on_update => 1 },
+        { data_type => 'timestamp', set_on_create => 1, set_on_update => 1 },
     );
 
 This will override the definition for these fields that Schema::Loader 
@@ -1015,6 +1018,7 @@ time entered for it (see the last line in the listing below):
     5|Designing with Web Standards|5|2010-02-16 04:15:45|2010-02-16 04:15:45
     9|TCP/IP Illustrated, Vol 3|5|2010-02-16 04:15:45|2010-02-16 04:15:45
     10|TCPIP_Illustrated_Vol-2|5|2010-02-16 04:18:42|2010-02-16 04:18:42
+    sqlite> .q
 
 Notice in the debug log that the SQL DBIC generated has changed to
 incorporate the datetime logic:
@@ -1098,7 +1102,7 @@ fifteen minutes:
     http://localhost:3000/books/list_recent/15
 
 Depending on how recently you added books, you might want to
-try a higher or lower value.
+try a higher or lower value for the minutes.
 
 
 =head2 Chaining ResultSets
@@ -1228,7 +1232,7 @@ C<lib/MyApp/Schema/Result/Author.pm> and add the following method (as
 always, it must be above the closing "C<1;>"):
 
     #
-    # Helper methods
+    # Row-level helper methods
     #
     sub full_name {
         my ($self) = @_;
@@ -1380,5 +1384,5 @@ Please report any errors, issues or suggestions to the author.  The
 most recent version of the Catalyst Tutorial can be found at
 L<http://dev.catalyst.perl.org/repos/Catalyst/Catalyst-Manual/5.80/trunk/lib/Catalyst/Manual/Tutorial/>.
 
-Copyright 2006-2008, Kennedy Clark, under Creative Commons License
+Copyright 2006-2010, Kennedy Clark, under Creative Commons License
 (L<http://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-sa/3.0/us/>).