Suggestions and fixes with thanks to Murray Walker (along with a few other minor...

[catagits/Catalyst-Manual.git] / lib / Catalyst / Manual / Tutorial.pod

diff --git a/lib/Catalyst/Manual/Tutorial.pod b/lib/Catalyst/Manual/Tutorial.pod
index 61a15ac..38c6145 100644 (file)
--- a/lib/Catalyst/Manual/Tutorial.pod
+++ b/lib/Catalyst/Manual/Tutorial.pod
@@ -11,7 +11,7 @@ commonly used features while focusing on real-world best practices.
 
 The tutorial is divided into the following sections:
 
-B<NOTE:> CLICK THESE LINKS TO JUMP TO CHAPTERS (the index links above
+B<NOTE: CLICK THESE LINKS TO JUMP TO CHAPTERS> (the index links above
 only navigate inside this page).
 
 =over 4
@@ -58,8 +58,8 @@ L<Appendices|Catalyst::Manual::Tutorial::Appendices>
 
 =back
 
-A tarball of the final application is available at
-L<http://dev.catalyst.perl.org/repos/Catalyst/trunk/examples/Tutorial/Final_Tarball/MyApp.tgz>.
+Final code tarballs for each part of the tutorial are available at 
+L<http://dev.catalyst.perl.org/repos/Catalyst/trunk/examples/Tutorial/>.
 
 
 =head1 Detailed Table of Contents
@@ -590,7 +590,7 @@ tutorial).
 
 =item *
 
-Kieren Diment for currently maintaining this document on CPAN.
+Kieren Diment for his oversite of Catalyst-related documentation.
 
 =item *
 
@@ -604,12 +604,14 @@ PostgreSQL content in the Appendix.
 =item *
 
 People who have emailed me with corrections and suggestions on the 
-tutorial.  As of the most recent release, this include: Florian Ragwitz, 
-Mauro Andreolini, Jim Howard, Giovanni Gigante, William Moreno,  
-Bryan Roach, Ashley Berlin, David Kamholz, Kevin Old, Henning Sprang,
-Jeremy Jones, David Kurtz, Ingo Wichmann, and Shlomi Fish.  I'm sure I
-am missing some names here... apologies for that (please let me know
-if you name should be here).
+tutorial.  As of the most recent release, this include: Florian 
+Ragwitz, Mauro Andreolini, Jim Howard, Giovanni Gigante, William 
+Moreno,  Bryan Roach, Ashley Berlin, David Kamholz, Kevin Old, Henning 
+Sprang, Jeremy Jones, David Kurtz, Ingo Wichmann, Shlomi Fish, Murray 
+Walker.  Also, thanks to Devin Austin for coming up with an initial 
+version of a non-TTSite wrapper page.  I'm sure I am missing some 
+names here... apologies for that (please let me know if you name 
+should be here).
 
 =back
 
@@ -619,7 +621,7 @@ Kennedy Clark, C<hkclark@gmail.com>
 
 Please report any errors, issues or suggestions to the author.  The
 most recent version of the Catalyst Tutorial can be found at
-L<http://dev.catalyst.perl.org/repos/Catalyst/trunk/Catalyst-Manual/lib/Catalyst/Manual/Tutorial/>.
+L<http://dev.catalyst.perl.org/repos/Catalyst/Catalyst-Manual/5.70/trunk/lib/Catalyst/Manual/Tutorial/>.
 
-Copyright 2006, Kennedy Clark, under Creative Commons License
+Copyright 2006-2008, Kennedy Clark, under Creative Commons License
 (L<http://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-nc-sa/2.5/>).