Tweak wording in Delta

[gitmo/Moose.git] / lib / Moose / Manual / Concepts.pod

diff --git a/lib/Moose/Manual/Concepts.pod b/lib/Moose/Manual/Concepts.pod
index 70cac00..3736ab4 100644 (file)
--- a/lib/Moose/Manual/Concepts.pod
+++ b/lib/Moose/Manual/Concepts.pod
@@ -67,8 +67,8 @@ method names, B<delegations>, a default value, and more.
 
 Attributes I<are not> methods, but defining them causes various
 accessor methods to be created. At a minimum, a normal attribute will
-always have a reader accessor method. Many attributes also other
-methods such as a writer method, clearer method, and predicate method
+always have a reader accessor method. Many attributes also have other
+methods, such as a writer method, clearer method, and predicate method
 ("has it been set?").
 
 An attribute may also define B<delegations>, which will create
@@ -135,14 +135,14 @@ Role are somewhat like mixins or interfaces in other OO languages.
 
   use Moose::Role;
 
-  has is_broken => (
+  requires 'break';
+
+  has 'is_broken' => (
       is  => 'rw',
       isa => 'Bool',
   );
 
-  requires 'break';
-
-  before 'break' => {
+  after 'break' => sub {
       my $self = shift;
 
       $self->is_broken(1);
@@ -177,7 +177,7 @@ define types for attributes. Moose has a set of built-in types based
 on what Perl provides, such as C<Str>, C<Num>, C<Bool>, C<HashRef>, etc.
 
 In addition, every class name in your application can also be used as
-a type name. We saw an example using C<DateTime> earlier.
+a type name.
 
 Finally, you can define your own types, either as subtypes or entirely
 new types, with their own constraints. For example, you could define a
@@ -312,7 +312,7 @@ class it represents.
 
   my $meta = User->meta();
 
-  for my $attribute ( $meta->compute_all_applicable_attributes ) {
+  for my $attribute ( $meta->get_all_attributes ) {
       print $attribute->name(), "\n";
 
       if ( $attribute->has_type_constraint ) {
@@ -320,7 +320,7 @@ class it represents.
       }
   }
 
-  for my $method ( $meta->compute_all_applicable_methods ) {
+  for my $method ( $meta->get_all_methods ) {
       print $method->name, "\n";
   }
 
@@ -355,11 +355,13 @@ extensions.
 
 So you're sold on Moose. Time to learn how to really use it.
 
-If you want to see how Moose would translate directly old school Perl
-5 OO code, check out L<Moose::Unsweetened>. This might be helpful for
-quickly wrapping your brain around some aspects of "the Moose way".
+If you want to see how Moose would translate directly into old school
+Perl 5 OO code, check out L<Moose::Manual::Unsweetened>. This might be
+helpful for quickly wrapping your brain around some aspects of "the
+Moose way".
 
-Obviously, the next thing to read is the rest of the L<Moose::Manual>.
+Or you can skip that and jump straight to L<Moose::Manual::Classes>
+and the rest of the L<Moose::Manual>.
 
 After that we recommend that you start with the L<Moose::Cookbook>. If
 you work your way through all the recipes under the basics section,