From: Dave Rolsky <autarch@urth.org>
Date: Mon, 20 Feb 2012 15:47:15 +0000 (-0600)
Subject: Small tweaks to new text
X-Git-Tag: 2.0500~44
X-Git-Url: http://git.shadowcat.co.uk/gitweb/gitweb.cgi?p=gitmo%2FMoose.git;a=commitdiff_plain;h=19e40f4bb7c4c86dac34db199000196ed6d79415

Small tweaks to new text
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diff --git a/lib/Moose/Cookbook/Extending/ExtensionOverview.pod b/lib/Moose/Cookbook/Extending/ExtensionOverview.pod
index e81d824..43ac327 100644
--- a/lib/Moose/Cookbook/Extending/ExtensionOverview.pod
+++ b/lib/Moose/Cookbook/Extending/ExtensionOverview.pod
@@ -278,17 +278,17 @@ override it in order to add additional functionality. Some differences to note:
 
 C<build_import_methods> simply returns the C<import>, C<unimport>, and
 C<init_meta> methods, rather than installing them under the appropriate names.
-This way, you can write your own which wrap the existing functionality.
-C<build_import_methods> also takes an additional C<install> parameter, which
-tells it to just go ahead and install these methods (since we don't need to
-modify them).
+This way, you can write your own methods which wrap the functionality provided
+by L<Moose::Exporter>.  The C<build_import_methods> sub also takes an
+additional C<install> parameter, which tells it to just go ahead and install
+these methods (since we don't need to modify them).
 
 =item C<sub init_meta>
 
 Next, we must write our C<init_meta> wrapper. The important things to remember
 are that it is called as a method, and that C<%options> needs to be passed
-through to the existing implementation. Calling the base implementation just
-uses the C<$init_meta> subroutine reference that was returned by
+through to the existing implementation. We call the base implementation by
+using the C<$init_meta> subroutine reference that was returned by
 C<build_import_methods> earlier.
 
 =item Additional implementation