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diff --git a/lib/DBIx/Class/Manual/Joining.pod b/lib/DBIx/Class/Manual/Joining.pod
index 0cf86bd..4bf3331 100644
--- a/lib/DBIx/Class/Manual/Joining.pod
+++ b/lib/DBIx/Class/Manual/Joining.pod
@@ -113,7 +113,7 @@ relationships.
 
 =head2 Whole related objects
 
-To fetch entire related objects, eg CDs and all Track data, use the
+To fetch entire related objects, e.g. CDs and all Track data, use the
 'prefetch' attribute:
 
   $schema->resultset('CD')->search(
@@ -129,7 +129,7 @@ This will produce SQL similar to the following:
   SELECT cd.ID, cd.Title, cd.Year, tracks.id, tracks.Name, tracks.Artist FROM CD JOIN Tracks ON CD.ID = tracks.CDID WHERE cd.Title = 'Funky CD' ORDER BY 'tracks.id';
 
 The syntax of 'prefetch' is the same as 'join' and implies the
-joining, so no need to use both together.
+joining, so there is no need to use both together.
 
 =head2 Subset of related fields
 
@@ -232,7 +232,7 @@ Which is:
 
 To perform joins using relations of the tables you are joining to, use
 a hashref to indicate the join depth. This can theoretically go as
-deep as you like (warning, contrived examples!): 
+deep as you like (warning: contrived examples!): 
 
   join => { room => { table => 'leg' } }