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diff --git a/lib/Catalyst/Manual/Tutorial/03_MoreCatalystBasics.pod b/lib/Catalyst/Manual/Tutorial/03_MoreCatalystBasics.pod
index aef37db..fc47f90 100644
--- a/lib/Catalyst/Manual/Tutorial/03_MoreCatalystBasics.pod
+++ b/lib/Catalyst/Manual/Tutorial/03_MoreCatalystBasics.pod
@@ -1297,11 +1297,11 @@ the "empty" table cell "<td></td>" with the following:
       [% # NOTE: See Chapter 4 for a better way to do this!                      -%]
       [% # First initialize a TT variable to hold a list.  Then use a TT FOREACH -%]
       [% # loop in 'side effect notation' to load just the last names of the     -%]
-      [% # authors into the list. Note that the 'push' TT vmethod does not print -%]
+      [% # authors into the list. Note that the 'push' TT vmethod doesn't return -%]
       [% # a value, so nothing will be printed here.  But, if you have something -%]
-      [% # in TT that does return a method and you don't want it printed, you    -%]
-      [% # can: 1) assign it to a bogus value, or 2) use the CALL keyword to     -%]
-      [% # call it and discard the return value.                                 -%]
+      [% # in TT that does return a value and you don't want it printed, you     -%]
+      [% # 1) assign it to a bogus value, or                                     -%]
+      [% # 2) use the CALL keyword to call it and discard the return value.      -%]
       [% tt_authors = [ ];
          tt_authors.push(author.last_name) FOREACH author = book.authors %]
       [% # Now use a TT 'virtual method' to display the author count in parens   -%]