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diff --git a/lib/Catalyst/Manual/Tutorial/03_MoreCatalystBasics.pod b/lib/Catalyst/Manual/Tutorial/03_MoreCatalystBasics.pod
index 216dec5..e21a8c9 100644
--- a/lib/Catalyst/Manual/Tutorial/03_MoreCatalystBasics.pod
+++ b/lib/Catalyst/Manual/Tutorial/03_MoreCatalystBasics.pod
@@ -145,7 +145,7 @@ The C<-d> option to C<script/myapp_server.pl>
 =item *
 
 The C<CATALYST_DEBUG=1> environment variable (or set it to
-zero to templorarily disable debug output).
+zero to temporarily disable debug output).
 
 =back
 
@@ -345,7 +345,7 @@ method" that you don't want to be an action at all, then just define
 the method without any attribute -- you can call it in your code, but 
 the Catalyst dispatcher will ignore it.)
 
-There are five types of "special" build-in C<:Private> actions: 
+There are five types of "special" built-in C<:Private> actions:
 C<begin>, C<end>, C<default>, C<index>, and C<auto>.
 
 =over 4
@@ -680,7 +680,7 @@ applications rely on DBIx::Class, as will this tutorial.
 
 Although DBIx::Class has included support for a C<create=dynamic> mode 
 to automatically read the database structure every time the 
-application starts, it's use is no longer recommended.  While it can 
+application starts, its use is no longer recommended.  While it can
 make for "flashy" demos, the use of the C<create=static> mode we use 
 below can be implemented just as quickly and provides many advantages 
 (such as the ability to add your own methods to the overall DBIC 
@@ -1021,7 +1021,7 @@ edit many individual files.
 In order to create a wrapper, you must first edit your TT view and
 tell it where to find your wrapper file. 
 
-Edit you TT view in C<lib/MyApp/View/HTML.pm> and change it to match the 
+Edit your TT view in C<lib/MyApp/View/HTML.pm> and change it to match the 
 following:
 
     __PACKAGE__->config(
@@ -1287,14 +1287,15 @@ L<DBIx::Class::Relationship/belongs_to> for the details.
 
 Although recent versions of SQLite and L<DBIx::Class::Schema::Loader> 
 automatically handle the C<has_many> and C<belongs_to> relationships, 
-C<many_to_many> relationships currently need to be manually inserted. 
-To add a C<many_to_many> relationship, first edit 
+C<many_to_many> relationship bridges (not technically a relationship)
+currently need to be manually inserted. 
+To add a C<many_to_many> relationship bridge, first edit 
 C<lib/MyApp/Schema/Result/Book.pm> and add the following text below 
 the C<# You can replace this text...> comment:
 
     # many_to_many():
     #   args:
-    #     1) Name of relationship, DBIC will create accessor with this name
+    #     1) Name of relationship bridge, DBIC will create accessor with this name
     #     2) Name of has_many() relationship this many_to_many() is shortcut for
     #     3) Name of belongs_to() relationship in model class of has_many() above
     #   You must already have the has_many() defined to use a many_to_many().
@@ -1305,26 +1306,26 @@ file.  As with any Perl package, we need to end the last line with
 a statement that evaluates to C<true>.  This is customarily done with
 C<1;> on a line by itself.
 
-The C<many_to_many> relationship is optional, but it makes it
+The C<many_to_many> relationship bridge is optional, but it makes it
 easier to map a book to its collection of authors.  Without 
-it, we would have to "walk" though the C<book_author> table as in 
+it, we would have to "walk" through the C<book_author> table as in 
 C<$book-E<gt>book_author-E<gt>first-E<gt>author-E<gt>last_name> (we 
 will see examples on how to use DBIx::Class objects in your code soon, 
 but note that because C<$book-E<gt>book_author> can return multiple 
 authors, we have to use C<first> to display a single author). 
 C<many_to_many> allows us to use the shorter 
 C<$book-E<gt>author-E<gt>first-E<gt>last_name>. Note that you cannot 
-define a C<many_to_many> relationship without also having the 
+define a C<many_to_many> relationship bridge without also having the 
 C<has_many> relationship in place.
 
 Then edit C<lib/MyApp/Schema/Result/Author.pm> and add the reverse 
-C<many_to_many> relationship for C<Author> as follows (again, be careful 
+C<many_to_many> relationship bridge for C<Author> as follows (again, be careful 
 to put in above the C<1;> but below the C<# DO NOT MODIFY THIS OR 
 ANYTHING ABOVE!> comment): 
 
     # many_to_many():
     #   args:
-    #     1) Name of relationship, DBIC will create accessor with this name
+    #     1) Name of relationship bridge, DBIC will create accessor with this name
     #     2) Name of has_many() relationship this many_to_many() is shortcut for
     #     3) Name of belongs_to() relationship in model class of has_many() above
     #   You must already have the has_many() defined to use a many_to_many().
@@ -1597,5 +1598,6 @@ Please report any errors, issues or suggestions to the author.  The
 most recent version of the Catalyst Tutorial can be found at
 L<http://dev.catalyst.perl.org/repos/Catalyst/Catalyst-Manual/5.80/trunk/lib/Catalyst/Manual/Tutorial/>.
 
-Copyright 2006-2010, Kennedy Clark, under Creative Commons License
+Copyright 2006-2010, Kennedy Clark, under the
+Creative Commons Attribution Share-Alike License Version 3.0
 (L<http://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-sa/3.0/us/>).