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diff --git a/lib/Catalyst/Manual/Tutorial/01_Intro.pod b/lib/Catalyst/Manual/Tutorial/01_Intro.pod
index 9b50622..42e53e4 100644
--- a/lib/Catalyst/Manual/Tutorial/01_Intro.pod
+++ b/lib/Catalyst/Manual/Tutorial/01_Intro.pod
@@ -115,7 +115,7 @@ Subjects covered by the tutorial include:
 
 =over 4
 
-=item * 
+=item *
 
 A simple application that lists and adds books.
 
@@ -125,7 +125,7 @@ The use of L<DBIx::Class> (DBIC) for the model (including
 some of the more advanced techniques you will probably want to use in
 your applications).
 
-=item * 
+=item *
 
 How to write CRUD (Create, Read, Update, and Delete) operations in
 Catalyst.
@@ -134,25 +134,25 @@ Catalyst.
 
 Authentication ("auth").
 
-=item * 
+=item *
 
 Role-based authorization ("authz").
 
-=item * 
+=item *
 
 Attempts to provide an example showing current (5.9) Catalyst
 practices.
 
-=item * 
+=item *
 
 The use of Template Toolkit (TT).
 
-=item * 
+=item *
 
 Useful techniques for troubleshooting and debugging Catalyst
 applications.
 
-=item * 
+=item *
 
 The use of SQLite as a database (with code also provided for MySQL and
 PostgreSQL).  (Note: Because we make use of the DBIx::Class Object
@@ -160,7 +160,7 @@ Relational Mapping [ORM] layer, out our application will be database
 agnostic and can easily be used by any of the databases supported by
 DBIx::Class.)
 
-=item * 
+=item *
 
 The use of L<HTML::FormFu> or L<HTML::FormHandler>
 for automated form processing and validation.
@@ -203,7 +203,7 @@ current directory), but we will keep it short and just use "C<$>".
 
 =over 4
 
-=item 1 
+=item 1
 
 Download a Tutorial Virtual Machine image from
 L<http://cattut.shadowcat.co.uk/>
@@ -244,7 +244,7 @@ machine.  You should get output along the lines of:
     ...
 
 You want the IP address on the second line below the C<eth0> interface.
-The image it design to automatically use a DHCP-assigned address.
+The image is designed to automatically use a DHCP-assigned address.
 
 
 Try to ping this IP address from your "host machine" (main desktop):
@@ -372,7 +372,7 @@ more information on Iceweasel at L<http://wiki.debian.org/Iceweasel>.
 
 Also, you might need to add more memory to your virtual machine if you
 want to run X Windows (or other tools that might require additional
-memory).  Consult the documentation for you virtualization software
+memory).  Consult the documentation of your virtualization software
 for instructions on how to do this (it's usually pretty simple).
 
 
@@ -385,7 +385,7 @@ that the Perl modules are run from ~/perl5 (in this case,
 recommend that you also consider using this very handy module.  It can
 greatly ease the process of maintaining and testing different
 combinations or Perl modules across development, staging, and production
-servers.  (The "relocatable Perl" feature can also be used to to run
+servers.  (The "relocatable Perl" feature can also be used to run
 both the modules B<and> Perl itself from your home directory [or any
 other directory you chose]).
 
@@ -456,7 +456,7 @@ help:
 
 =item *
 
-L<http://vmfaq.com/entry/34/>
+L<http://vmfaq.com/index.php?View=entry&EntryID=34>
 
 =item *
 
@@ -481,11 +481,11 @@ v5.80020 might show up as 5.8002):
 
 =over 4
 
-=item * 
+=item *
 
 Debian 6 (Squeeze)
 
-=item * 
+=item *
 
 Catalyst v5.90002
 
@@ -493,7 +493,7 @@ Catalyst v5.90002
 
 Catalyst::Devel v1.34
 
-=item * 
+=item *
 
 DBIx::Class v0.08195
 
@@ -510,7 +510,7 @@ Template Toolkit v2.22
 
 HTML::FormFu -- v0.09004
 
-=item * 
+=item *
 
 B<NOTE:> You can check the versions you have installed with the
 following command (note the slash before the space):
@@ -529,7 +529,7 @@ or:
 
     perl -MCatalyst::Devel -e 'print "$Catalyst::Devel::VERSION\n";'
 
-=item * 
+=item *
 
 This tutorial will show URLs in the format of C<http://localhost:3000>,
 but if you are running your web browser from outside the Tutorial
@@ -538,8 +538,8 @@ for the C<localhost> in the URLs (again, you can get the IP address for
 eth0 from the C<ifconfig> command).  For example, if your VM has an
 IP address of 192.168.0.12, you will want to use a base URL of
 C<http://192.168.0.12:3000>.  Note that the development server
-defaults to port 3000 (you can change with with the "-p" option on the
-command line.
+defaults to port 3000 (you can change with the "-p" option on the
+command line).
 
 B<Please Note:> Depending on the web browser you are using, you might
 need to hit C<Shift+Reload> or C<Ctrl+Reload> to pull a fresh page when