X-Git-Url: http://git.shadowcat.co.uk/gitweb/gitweb.cgi?p=catagits%2FCatalyst-Manual.git;a=blobdiff_plain;f=lib%2FCatalyst%2FManual%2FTutorial%2F01_Intro.pod;h=297e0b91dda13def394456c7542d054fce77d9cc;hp=fa3a3608ea70099e255d014873233232a6985ad8;hb=d35624c1e68939a527c25ff751c312ed3235594f;hpb=ec5b24b2e4c907cb9ea2a099ebf6fe69a9042cbd
diff --git a/lib/Catalyst/Manual/Tutorial/01_Intro.pod b/lib/Catalyst/Manual/Tutorial/01_Intro.pod
index fa3a360..297e0b9 100644
--- a/lib/Catalyst/Manual/Tutorial/01_Intro.pod
+++ b/lib/Catalyst/Manual/Tutorial/01_Intro.pod
@@ -70,21 +70,29 @@ form management).
The most recent code for the tutorial is included on the Tutorial Virtual
Machine you can download from:
+L
+
+See L below for
+instructions getting and using the VM.
+
+Should you wish to download the code directly, you get pull it via the
+following command (note: will probably be switching to git soon):
+
svn co http://dev.catalyst.perl.org/repos/Catalyst/trunk/examples/Tutorial/ CatalystTutorial
This will download the most recent code for each chapter of the
tutorial into the CatalystTutorial directory on your machine.
-B
+errors, or accidentally skipped part of the tutorial.
B It should make little or no difference to Catalyst's
operation, B that you can download and use to work through
the full tutorial step by step. B to avoid issues
that may crop up if you are working with a different configuration. We
@@ -176,8 +184,6 @@ applications can be found at
L and
in the C area of the Catalyst Subversion repository at
L.
-***Todo: update link above?
-
=head1 STARTING WITH THE TUTORIAL VIRTUAL MACHINE
@@ -202,8 +208,11 @@ C (or C) Debian commands.
=item 1
-Download the C image from
-L.
+Download a Tutorial Virtual Machine image from
+L
+
+B
+B<(and everything else they do for the Perl community)!>
=item 2
@@ -258,10 +267,10 @@ If you are not seeing a valid IP address or it's not responding to pings
(for example, you get error messages along the lines of "Request timed
out", "100% packet loss", or "Destination Host Unreachable"), there
could be a few network-related issues you might need to sort out. See
-the section below L
+the section below L
for additional information and troubleshooting advice.
-L Remember this IP address... you will be using it throughout the
+B Remember this IP address... you will be using it throughout the
tutorial.
@@ -329,6 +338,13 @@ modules across development, staging, and production servers. (The
B Perl itself from your home directory [or any other directory you
chose]).
+B: Please provide feedback on how the Virtual Machine approach for
+the tutorial works for you. If you have suggestions or comments, you
+can reach the author through the email address at the bottom of this
+page or via an RT ticket at
+L.
+
+
=head2 Sorting Out Virtual Machine Network-Related Issues
@@ -384,15 +400,15 @@ help:
=item *
-L
+L
=item *
-L
+L
=item *
-L
+L
=back
@@ -469,13 +485,14 @@ C. Note that the development server
defaults to port 3000 (you can change with with the "-p" option on the
command line.
-B Depending on the web browser you are using, you might need
-to hit C or C to pull a fresh page when
+B Depending on the web browser you are using, you might
+need to hit C or C to pull a fresh page when
testing your application at various points (see
-L for a comprehensive
-list of options for each browser). Also, the C<-k> keepalive option to
-the development server can be necessary with some browsers (especially
-Internet Explorer).
+L for a
+comprehensive list of options for each browser).
+
+Also, the C<-k> B to the development server can be
+necessary with some browsers (B).
=back
@@ -501,10 +518,10 @@ L
Kennedy Clark, C
-Please report any errors, issues or suggestions to the author. The
-most recent version of the Catalyst Tutorial can be found at
-L.
+Feel free to contact the author for any errors or suggestions, but the
+best way to report issues is via the CPAN RT Bug system at
+L.
-Copyright 2006-2010, Kennedy Clark, under the
+Copyright 2006-2011, Kennedy Clark, under the
Creative Commons Attribution Share-Alike License Version 3.0
(L).