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diff --git a/lib/Catalyst/Manual/Deployment/FastCGI.pod b/lib/Catalyst/Manual/Deployment/FastCGI.pod
index 13bbabb..90a6f24 100644
--- a/lib/Catalyst/Manual/Deployment/FastCGI.pod
+++ b/lib/Catalyst/Manual/Deployment/FastCGI.pod
@@ -4,9 +4,9 @@ Catalyst::Manual::Deployment::FastCGI - Deploying Catalyst with FastCGI
 
 =head1 FastCGI Deployment
 
-FastCGI is a high-performance extension to CGI. It is suitable
-for production environments, and is the standard method for deploying Catalyst
-in shared hosting environments.
+FastCGI is a high-performance extension to CGI. It is suitable for production
+environments, and is the standard method for deploying Catalyst in shared
+hosting environments.
 
 =head2 Pros
 
@@ -27,9 +27,9 @@ restarting.
 
 =head3 Load-balancing
 
-You can launch your application on multiple backend servers and allow the
-frontend web server to load-balance between all of them.  And of course, if
-one goes down, your app continues to run fine.
+You can launch your application on multiple backend servers and allow
+the frontend web server to perform load-balancing among all of them. And
+of course, if one goes down, your app continues to run.
 
 =head3 Multiple versions of the same app
 
@@ -41,6 +41,10 @@ versions of the same app on a single server.
 Since your app is not running inside of Apache, the faster mpm_worker module
 can be used without worrying about the thread safety of your application.
 
+=head3 Widely supported.
+
+FastCGI is compatible with many server implementations, not just Apache.
+
 =head2 Cons
 
 You may have to disable mod_deflate.  If you experience page hangs with
@@ -51,8 +55,6 @@ mod_fastcgi then remove deflate.load and deflate.conf from mods-enabled/
 With FastCGI, there are more things to monitor and more processes running
 than when using mod_perl.
 
-XXX - FIXME, note not just apache!
-
 =head2 Standalone FastCGI Server
 
 In server mode the application runs as a standalone server and accepts
@@ -79,9 +81,9 @@ server.
 
 =head1 WEB SERVERS
 
-Any web server which supports FastCGI should work with Catalyst. Configuration recipies for
-well-known web servers are linked below, and we would welcome contributions from people
-deploying Catalyst against other web servers.
+Any web server which supports FastCGI should work with Catalyst. Configuration
+recipes for well-known web servers are linked below, and we would welcome
+contributions from people deploying Catalyst on other web servers.
 
 =head2 Apache