Misc updates with thanks to JC Wren

[catagits/Catalyst-Manual.git] / lib / Catalyst / Manual / Tutorial / Authentication.pod

diff --git a/lib/Catalyst/Manual/Tutorial/Authentication.pod b/lib/Catalyst/Manual/Tutorial/Authentication.pod
index cb61aea..499aa53 100644 (file)
--- a/lib/Catalyst/Manual/Tutorial/Authentication.pod
+++ b/lib/Catalyst/Manual/Tutorial/Authentication.pod
@@ -139,10 +139,10 @@ Notice how the helper has added three new table-specific result source
 files to the C<lib/MyApp/Schema/MyApp> directory.  And, more
 importantly, even if there were changes to the existing result source
 files, those changes would have only been written above the C<# DO NOT
-MODIFY THIS OR ANYTHING ABOVE!> comment and your hand-editted
+MODIFY THIS OR ANYTHING ABOVE!> comment and your hand-edited
 enhancements would have been preserved.
 
-Speaking of "hand-editted enhancements," we should now add
+Speaking of "hand-edit ted enhancements," we should now add
 relationship information to the three new result source files.  Edit
 each of these files and add the following information between the C<#
 DO NOT MODIFY THIS OR ANYTHING ABOVE!> comment and the closing C<1;>:
@@ -266,6 +266,10 @@ C<StackTrace> is new):
             Session::State::Cookie
         /);
 
+B<Note:> As discussed in MoreCatalystBasics, different versions of 
+C<Catalyst::Devel> have used a variety of methods to load the plugins. 
+You put the plugins in the C<use Catalyst> statement if you prefer.
+
 The C<Authentication> plugin supports Authentication while the
 C<Session> plugins are required to maintain state across multiple HTTP
 requests.
@@ -366,12 +370,8 @@ such matters up to you, the designer and programmer.
 Then open C<lib/MyApp/Controller/Login.pm>, locate the C<sub index
 :Path :Args(0)> method (or C<sub index : Private> if you are using an
 older version of Catalyst) that was automatically inserted by the
-helpers when we created the Login controller above, and delete this
-line:
-
-    $c->response->body('Matched MyApp::Controller::Login in Login.');
-
-Then update it to match:
+helpers when we created the Login controller above, and update the
+definition of C<sub index> to match:
 
     =head2 index
     
@@ -501,7 +501,7 @@ the following method:
         my ($self, $c) = @_;
     
         # Allow unauthenticated users to reach the login page.  This
-        # allows anauthenticated users to reach any action in the Login
+        # allows unauthenticated users to reach any action in the Login
         # controller.  To lock it down to a single action, we could use:
         #   if ($c->action eq $c->controller('Login')->action_for('index'))
         # to only allow unauthenticated access to the 'index' action we