From: Dave Rolsky Date: Thu, 11 Dec 2008 16:23:25 +0000 (+0000) Subject: More wording tweaks X-Git-Tag: 0.66~27^2~39 X-Git-Url: http://git.shadowcat.co.uk/gitweb/gitweb.cgi?a=commitdiff_plain;h=cdebe1c6ff1cf6263c2488c64eeb382461c19b30;p=gitmo%2FMoose.git More wording tweaks --- diff --git a/lib/Moose/Manual.pod b/lib/Moose/Manual.pod index 739eace..fe3a9c3 100644 --- a/lib/Moose/Manual.pod +++ b/lib/Moose/Manual.pod @@ -38,12 +38,11 @@ languages. Moose makes Perl 5 OO both simpler and more powerful. It encapsulates all the tricks of Perl 5 power users in high-level declarative APIs -which are easy to use, and don't require any special knowledge of how -Perl works under the hood. +which are easy to use, and doesn't require any special knowledge of +how Perl works under the hood. -Moose makes Perl 5 OO fun, accessible, and powerful. And if you want -to dig about in the guts, Moose lets you do that too, by using and -extending its powerful introspection API. +If you want to dig about in the guts, Moose lets you do that too, by +using and extending its powerful introspection API. =head1 AN EXAMPLE @@ -107,13 +106,16 @@ This manual consists of a number of documents. Introduces Moose concepts, and contrasts them against "old school" Perl 5 OO. -=item L +=item L -How do you make use of Moose in your classes? +How do you make use of Moose in your classes? Now that I'm a Moose, +how do I subclass something? -=item L +=item L -Now that I'm a Moose, how do I subclass something? +Attributes are a core part of the Moose OO system. An attribute is a +piece of data that an object has. Moose has a lot of attribute-related +features! =item L @@ -121,12 +123,6 @@ Learn how objects are built in Moose, and in particular about the C, C methods. Also covers object destruction with C. -=item L - -Attributes are a core part of the Moose OO system. An attribute is a -piece of data that an object has. Moose has a lot of attribute-related -features! - =item L A method modifier lets you say "before calling method X, do this