From: Jesse Luehrs <doy@tozt.net>
Date: Sat, 7 May 2011 17:56:55 +0000 (-0500)
Subject: typos
X-Git-Tag: 2.0003~14
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diff --git a/lib/Moose/Cookbook/Basics/Recipe9.pod b/lib/Moose/Cookbook/Basics/Recipe9.pod
index a6fdf36..0ebc98a 100644
--- a/lib/Moose/Cookbook/Basics/Recipe9.pod
+++ b/lib/Moose/Cookbook/Basics/Recipe9.pod
@@ -47,7 +47,7 @@ __END__
 =head1 DESCRIPTION
 
 This Moose cookbook recipe shows how operator overloading, coercion,
-and sub types can be used to mimic the human reproductive system
+and subtypes can be used to mimic the human reproductive system
 (well, the selection of genes at least).
 
 =head1 INTRODUCTION
@@ -90,7 +90,7 @@ class for each gene.
 
   has 'color' => ( is => 'ro', isa => 'bey2_color' );
 
-This class is trivial, We have a type constraint for the allowed
+This class is trivial. We have a type constraint for the allowed
 colors, and a C<color> attribute.
 
 =head2 Human::Gene::gey
@@ -109,7 +109,7 @@ that the I<gey> gene allows for different colors.
 
 =head1 EYE COLOR
 
-We could just give add four attributes (two of each gene) to the
+We could just give four attributes (two of each gene) to the
 C<Human> class, but this is a bit messy. Instead, we'll abstract the
 genes into a container class, C<Human::EyeColor>. Then a C<Human> can
 have a single C<eye_color> attribute.
@@ -139,12 +139,12 @@ that a coercion will fail if it attempts to coerce a string like
 "indigo", because that is not a valid color for either type of gene.
 
 As an aside, you can see that we can define several identical
-attributes at once by supply an array reference of names as the first
+attributes at once by supplying an array reference of names as the first
 argument to C<has>.
 
 We also need a method to calculate the actual eye color that results
 from a set of genes. The I<bey2> brown gene is dominant over both blue
-and green. The I<gey> green gene dominant over blue.
+and green. The I<gey> green gene is dominant over blue.
 
   sub color {
       my ($self) = @_;
@@ -166,7 +166,7 @@ so we define a string overloading for the class:
   use overload '""' => \&color, fallback => 1;
 
 Finally, we need to define overloading for addition. That way we can
-add together to C<Human::EyeColor> objects and get a new one with a
+add together two C<Human::EyeColor> objects and get a new one with a
 new (genetically correct) eye color.
 
   use overload '+' => \&_overload_add, fallback => 1;
@@ -192,7 +192,7 @@ new (genetically correct) eye color.
       return 1 + int( rand(2) );
   }
 
-When two eye color objects are added together the C<_overload_add()>
+When two eye color objects are added together, the C<_overload_add()>
 method will be passed two C<Human::EyeColor> objects. These are the
 left and right side operands for the C<+> operator. This method
 returns a new C<Human::EyeColor> object.