From: Chris Prather <chris@prather.org>
Date: Mon, 24 Aug 2009 00:46:22 +0000 (-0400)
Subject: add proof reading changes from dec
X-Git-Tag: 0.89_01~5^2^2
X-Git-Url: http://git.shadowcat.co.uk/gitweb/gitweb.cgi?a=commitdiff_plain;h=5358230acb436000162cca4cf2a387d4861cbf5d;p=gitmo%2FMoose.git

add proof reading changes from dec
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diff --git a/lib/Moose/Manual/Delegation.pod b/lib/Moose/Manual/Delegation.pod
index e0a5d09..ee41c10 100644
--- a/lib/Moose/Manual/Delegation.pod
+++ b/lib/Moose/Manual/Delegation.pod
@@ -111,10 +111,10 @@ similar.
       }
   )
 
-By providing using C<Array> trait to the C<traits> parameter you signal to
+By providing the C<Array> trait to the C<traits> parameter you signal to
 Moose that you would like to use the set of Array helpers. Moose will then
-create an C<add_item> and a C<next_item> method that "just works". Behind the
-scenes C<add_item> is something like
+create an C<add_item> and a C<next_item> method that "just works". Behind
+the scenes C<add_item> is something like
 
   sub add_item { 
       my ($self, @items) = @_;
@@ -142,7 +142,7 @@ curry methods when creating delegates.
         }
     )
 
-With this definition calling C<$spider->set_user_agent('MyClient')> will
+With this definition, calling C<$spider->set_user_agent('MyClient')> will
 behind the scenes call C<$spider->request->header('UserAgent', 'MyClient')>.
 
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