From: mateu <hunter@missoula.org>
Date: Sat, 27 Mar 2010 02:58:39 +0000 (-0400)
Subject: some words for Meta Cookbook.
X-Git-Tag: 1.02~21
X-Git-Url: http://git.shadowcat.co.uk/gitweb/gitweb.cgi?a=commitdiff_plain;h=2a67e654c06bacebc1620742d2e4a03155a4fa05;p=gitmo%2FMoose.git

some words for Meta Cookbook.
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diff --git a/lib/Moose/Cookbook/Meta/Recipe1.pod b/lib/Moose/Cookbook/Meta/Recipe1.pod
index 853df78..79ce2b7 100644
--- a/lib/Moose/Cookbook/Meta/Recipe1.pod
+++ b/lib/Moose/Cookbook/Meta/Recipe1.pod
@@ -33,7 +33,7 @@ create your own Moose variant.
 
 =head2 Examples
 
-Let's say that you want to additional properties to
+Let's say that you want to add additional properties to
 attributes. Specifically, we want to add a "label" property to each
 attribute, so we can write C<<
 My::Class->meta()->get_attribute('size')->label() >>. The first two
diff --git a/lib/Moose/Cookbook/Meta/Recipe2.pod b/lib/Moose/Cookbook/Meta/Recipe2.pod
index 0617614..3f360c0 100644
--- a/lib/Moose/Cookbook/Meta/Recipe2.pod
+++ b/lib/Moose/Cookbook/Meta/Recipe2.pod
@@ -97,7 +97,7 @@ C<get_attribute_list>. This method is called on the metaclass object.
 The C<get_attribute_list> method returns a list of attribute names. You can
 then use C<get_attribute> to get the L<Moose::Meta::Attribute> object itself.
 
-Once you this meta-attribute object, you can call methods on it like this:
+Once you have this meta-attribute object, you can call methods on it like this:
 
   print $point->meta->get_attribute('x')->type_constraint;
      => Int
@@ -109,7 +109,7 @@ attribute metaclass.
 
 =head1 RECIPE REVIEW
 
-We start by  creating a new attribute metaclass.
+We start by creating a new attribute metaclass.
 
   package MyApp::Meta::Attribute::Labeled;
   use Moose;
diff --git a/lib/Moose/Cookbook/Meta/Recipe6.pod b/lib/Moose/Cookbook/Meta/Recipe6.pod
index 1cc3648..9c1a44a 100644
--- a/lib/Moose/Cookbook/Meta/Recipe6.pod
+++ b/lib/Moose/Cookbook/Meta/Recipe6.pod
@@ -126,7 +126,7 @@ more information about the method.
 
 A custom method metaclass lets us add both behavior and
 meta-information to methods. Unfortunately, because the Perl
-interpreter does not private easy hooks into method declaration, the
+interpreter does not provide easy hooks into method declaration, the
 API we have for adding these methods is not very pretty.
 
 That can be improved with custom Moose-like sugar, or even by using a