From: Hans Dieter Pearcey <hdp@weftsoar.net>
Date: Tue, 31 Mar 2009 20:47:27 +0000 (-0400)
Subject: edit contentious syntax
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edit contentious syntax
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diff --git a/lib/Moose/Cookbook.pod b/lib/Moose/Cookbook.pod
index 8ed5962..d4a649f 100644
--- a/lib/Moose/Cookbook.pod
+++ b/lib/Moose/Cookbook.pod
@@ -18,10 +18,9 @@ explains Moose concepts without being too code-heavy.
 
 =head2 Basic Moose
 
-These recipes will give you a good idea of what Moose is capable,
-starting with simple attribute declaration, and moving on to more
-powerful features like laziness, types, type coercion, method
-modifiers, and more.
+These recipes will give you a good overview of Moose's capabilities, starting
+with simple attribute declaration, and moving on to more powerful features like
+laziness, types, type coercion, method modifiers, and more.
 
 =over 4