From: Dave Rolsky <autarch@urth.org>
Date: Sat, 25 Jul 2009 18:09:19 +0000 (-0500)
Subject: Reword a bit to make each sentence start with a capital letter
X-Git-Tag: 0.89~30
X-Git-Url: http://git.shadowcat.co.uk/gitweb/gitweb.cgi?a=commitdiff_plain;h=028d99be25a948b582e2ccb0af5679f49faa7d8b;p=gitmo%2FMoose.git

Reword a bit to make each sentence start with a capital letter
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diff --git a/lib/Moose/Manual/Attributes.pod b/lib/Moose/Manual/Attributes.pod
index 0c86f50..0ff2b58 100644
--- a/lib/Moose/Manual/Attributes.pod
+++ b/lib/Moose/Manual/Attributes.pod
@@ -41,9 +41,9 @@ This says that all C<Person> objects have an optional read-write
 The options passed to C<has> define the properties of the
 attribute. There are many options, but in the simplest form you just
 need to set C<is>, which can be either C<rw> (read-write) or C<ro>
-(read-only). C<rw> permits mutation of the attribute's value using the
-accessor. C<ro> does not; you may only read the current value of the
-attribute.
+(read-only). When an attribute is C<rw>, you can change it by passing
+a value to its accessor. When an attribute is C<ro>, you may only read
+the current value of the attribute.
 
 In fact, you could even omit C<is>, but that gives you an attribute
 that has no accessor. This can be useful with other attribute options,