Small edits for M::AH bits in Delta

diff --git a/lib/Moose/Manual/Delta.pod b/lib/Moose/Manual/Delta.pod
index 1e1d712..d8a9436 100644 (file)
--- a/lib/Moose/Manual/Delta.pod
+++ b/lib/Moose/Manual/Delta.pod
@@ -25,19 +25,20 @@ L<MooseX::AttributeHelpers>.  Major changes include:
 
 =item C<traits>, not C<metaclass>
 
-All of the method providers are available via traits only.  The custom
-metaclasses were strictly inferior to applying attribute metaclass traits.
+Method providers are only available via traits.
 
 =item C<handles>, not C<provides> or C<curries>
 
-C<provides> syntax was like core Moose C<< handles => HASHREF >> syntax, but
-with the keys and values reversed.  This was confusing, and
-AttributeHelpers now uses C<< handles => HASHREF >> in a way that
-should be intuitive to anyone already familiar with it for normal attributes.
+The C<provides> syntax was like core Moose C<< handles => HASHREF >>
+syntax, but with the keys and values reversed.  This was confusing,
+and AttributeHelpers now uses C<< handles => HASHREF >> in a way that
+should be intuitive to anyone already familiar with how it is used for
+other attributes.
 
-The C<curries> functionality provided by AttributeHelpers has been generalized
-to apply to all cases of C<< handles => HASHREF >>, though not every piece of
-functionality has been ported (currying with a CODEREF is not supported).
+The C<curries> functionality provided by AttributeHelpers has been
+generalized to apply to all cases of C<< handles => HASHREF >>, though
+not every piece of functionality has been ported (currying with a
+CODEREF is not supported).
 
 =back