:unique nitpicking continues.

p4raw-id: //depot/perl@17149

diff --git a/pod/perlfunc.pod b/pod/perlfunc.pod
index 026e134..b1d7ebd 100644 (file)
--- a/pod/perlfunc.pod
+++ b/pod/perlfunc.pod
@@ -3112,8 +3112,8 @@ to have its own copy of the global.)  Examples:
     our $VERSION : unique = "1.00";
 
 Note that this attribute also has the effect of making the global
-readonly after the first new interpreter has been cloned (for example,
-after the first new thread has been created).
+readonly when the first new interpreter is cloned (for example,
+when the first new thread is created).
 
 Multi-interpreter environments can come to being either through the
 fork() emulation on Windows platforms, or by embedding perl in a