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 =head1 PERL VERSION COMPATIBILITY
 
-Currently, Moose officially supports being run on Perl 5.8.3+. Our current
-support policy is to support the earliest version of Perl shipped in a stable
-release of any major operating system (this usually tends to mean CentOS). We
+As of version 2.00, Moose officially supports being run on perl 5.8.3+. Our
+current policy is to support the earliest version of Perl shipped in the latest
+stable release of any major operating system (this tends to mean CentOS). We
 will provide at least six months notice (two major releases) when we decide to
-increase the officially supported version. The next time this will happen is in
-January of 2012, when Moose 2.0600 will increase the minimum officially
-supported version to 5.10.1.
+increase the officially supported Perl version. The next time this will happen
+is in January of 2012, when Moose 2.06 will increase the minimum officially
+supported Perl version to 5.10.1.
 
-"Officially supported" does not mean that these are the only version of Perl
+"Officially supported" does not mean that these are the only versions of Perl
 that Moose will work with. Our declared perl dependency will remain at 5.8.3 as
 long as our test suite continues to pass on 5.8.3. What this does mean is that
 the core Moose dev team will not be spending any time fixing bugs on versions
 that aren't officially supported, and new contributions will not be rejected
 due to being incompatible with older versions of perl except in the most
-trivial of cases. We will however still welcome patches to make Moose
+trivial of cases. We will, however, still welcome patches to make Moose
 compatible with earlier versions, if other people are still interested in
 maintaining compatibility. Note that although performance regressions are
 acceptable in order to maintain backwards compatibility (as long as they only
 affect the older versions), functionality changes and buggy behavior will not
-be. If it becomes unable to provide identical functionality between modern perl
-versions and unsupported perl versions, we will drop support completely
-instead.
+be. If it becomes impossible to provide identical functionality between modern
+Perl versions and unsupported Perl versions, we will increase our declared perl
+dependency instead.
 
 =head1 CONTRIBUTING