Small tweaks to Contributing

diff --git a/lib/Moose/Manual/Contributing.pod b/lib/Moose/Manual/Contributing.pod
index c57b8ef..fc2be3c 100644 (file)
--- a/lib/Moose/Manual/Contributing.pod
+++ b/lib/Moose/Manual/Contributing.pod
@@ -18,7 +18,7 @@ Note that this document applies to both Moose and L<Class::MOP> development.
 
 Moose already has a fairly large feature set, and we are currently
 B<not> looking to add any major new features to it. If you have an
-idea for a new feature in Moose, you are invited instead to create a
+idea for a new feature in Moose, you are encouraged to create a
 MooseX module first.
 
 At this stage, no new features will even be considered for addition
@@ -27,13 +27,12 @@ it is absolutely 100% impossible to implement the feature outside the
 core.
 
 If you think it is 100% impossible, please come discuss it with us on IRC or
-via e-mail. However, your feature may need a small hook in the core, or a
+via e-mail. Your feature may need a small hook in the core, or a
 refactoring of some core modules, and we are definitely open to that.
 
-Moose was built from the ground up with the idea of being highly
-extensible, and quite often the feature requests we see can be
-implemented through a couple of small and well placed extensions. Try
-it, it is much easier than you might think.
+Moose was built from the ground up with the idea of being highly extensible,
+and quite often the feature requests we see can be implemented through small
+extensions. Try it, it's much easier than you might think.
 
 =head1 PEOPLE
 
@@ -45,9 +44,9 @@ As Moose has matured, some structure has emerged in the process.
 
 You.
 
-If you have commit access, you can create a topic on the main Moose.git,
-otherwise either give us your SSH key or create your own clone of the
-L<git://git.moose.perl.org/Moose.git> repository or fork of the GitHub mirror.
+If you have commit access, you can create a topic on the main Moose.git repo.
+If you don't have a commit bit, give us your SSH key or create your own clone
+of the L<git://git.moose.perl.org/Moose.git> repository.
 
 The relevant repository URIs are: