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@@ -18,10 +18,9 @@ explains Moose concepts without being too code-heavy.
 
 =head2 Basic Moose
 
-These recipes will give you a good idea of what Moose is capable,
-starting with simple attribute declaration, and moving on to more
-powerful features like laziness, types, type coercion, method
-modifiers, and more.
+These recipes will give you a good overview of Moose's capabilities, starting
+with simple attribute declaration, and moving on to more powerful features like
+laziness, types, type coercion, method modifiers, and more.
 
 =over 4