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diff --git a/pod/perl571delta.pod b/pod/perl571delta.pod
index 2975c06..aff02e5 100644
--- a/pod/perl571delta.pod
+++ b/pod/perl571delta.pod
@@ -514,7 +514,7 @@ Storable, Text-Tabs+Wrap.
 =item *
 
 Hashes now use Bob Jenkins "One-at-a-Time" hashing key algorithm
-(http://burtleburtle.net/bob/hash/doobs.html).  This algorithm is
+( http://burtleburtle.net/bob/hash/doobs.html ).  This algorithm is
 reasonably fast while producing a much better spread of values than
 the old hashing algorithm (originally by Chris Torek, later tweaked by
 Ilya Zakharevich).  Hash values output from the algorithm on a hash of
@@ -669,7 +669,7 @@ need a thread library package installed. See README.hpux.
 
 =item *
 
-MacOS Classic (MacPerl has of course been available since
+Mac OS Classic (MacPerl has of course been available since
 perl 5.004 but now the source code bases of standard Perl
 and MacPerl have been synchronised)
 
@@ -771,17 +771,17 @@ SOCKS support is now much more robust.
 If your file system supports symbolic links you can build Perl outside
 of the source directory by
 
-	mkdir /tmp/perl/build/directory
-	cd /tmp/perl/build/directory
+	mkdir perl/build/directory
+	cd perl/build/directory
 	sh /path/to/perl/source/Configure -Dmksymlinks ...
 
-This will create in /tmp/perl/build/directory a tree of symbolic links
+This will create in perl/build/directory a tree of symbolic links
 pointing to files in /path/to/perl/source.  The original files are left
 unaffected.  After Configure has finished you can just say
 
 	make all test
 
-and Perl will be built and tested, all in /tmp/perl/build/directory.
+and Perl will be built and tested, all in perl/build/directory.
 
 =back
 
@@ -1046,8 +1046,8 @@ working order yet.
 
 If you find what you think is a bug, you might check the articles
 recently posted to the comp.lang.perl.misc newsgroup and the perl
-bug database at http://bugs.perl.org.  There may also be
-information at http://www.perl.com/perl/, the Perl Home Page.
+bug database at http://bugs.perl.org/  There may also be
+information at http://www.perl.com/perl/ , the Perl Home Page.
 
 If you believe you have an unreported bug, please run the B<perlbug>
 program included with your release.  Be sure to trim your bug down