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diff --git a/lib/DBIx/Class/Manual/Cookbook.pod b/lib/DBIx/Class/Manual/Cookbook.pod
index 7fa60d8..c84df81 100644
--- a/lib/DBIx/Class/Manual/Cookbook.pod
+++ b/lib/DBIx/Class/Manual/Cookbook.pod
@@ -141,7 +141,7 @@ Next, you can execute your complex query using bind parameters like this:
   );
 
 ... and you'll get back a perfect L<DBIx::Class::ResultSet> (except, of course,
-that you cannot modify the rows it contains, ie. cannot call L</update>,
+that you cannot modify the rows it contains, e.g. cannot call L</update>,
 L</delete>, ...  on it).
 
 Note that you cannot have bind parameters unless is_virtual is set to true.
@@ -201,7 +201,7 @@ to access the returned value:
   # SELECT name name, LENGTH( name )
   # FROM artist
 
-Note that the C<as> attribute B<has absolutely nothing to do> with the sql
+Note that the C<as> attribute B<has absolutely nothing to do> with the SQL
 syntax C< SELECT foo AS bar > (see the documentation in 
 L<DBIx::Class::ResultSet/ATTRIBUTES>). You can control the C<AS> part of the
 generated SQL via the C<-as> field attribute as follows:
@@ -329,7 +329,7 @@ You can write subqueries relatively easily in DBIC.
     artist_id => { 'IN' => $inside_rs->get_column('id')->as_query },
   });
 
-The usual operators ( =, !=, IN, NOT IN, etc) are supported.
+The usual operators ( =, !=, IN, NOT IN, etc.) are supported.
 
 B<NOTE>: You have to explicitly use '=' when doing an equality comparison.
 The following will B<not> work:
@@ -411,7 +411,7 @@ Then call your new method in your code:
 
 Using SQL functions on the left hand side of a comparison is generally not a
 good idea since it requires a scan of the entire table. (Unless your RDBMS
-supports indexes on expressions - including return values of functions -, and
+supports indexes on expressions - including return values of functions - and
 you create an index on the return value of the function in question.) However,
 it can be accomplished with C<DBIx::Class> when necessary.
 
@@ -1621,10 +1621,10 @@ B<Deploy update to customers>
 Add the L<DBIx::Class::Schema::Versioned> schema component to your
 Schema class. This will add a new table to your database called
 C<dbix_class_schema_vesion> which will keep track of which version is installed
-and warn if the user trys to run a newer schema version than the
+and warn if the user tries to run a newer schema version than the
 database thinks it has.
 
-Alternatively, you can send the conversion sql scripts to your
+Alternatively, you can send the conversion SQL scripts to your
 customers as above.
 
 =head2 Setting quoting for the generated SQL
@@ -1706,7 +1706,7 @@ methods:
     }
   );
 
-In conditions (eg. C<\%cond> in the L<DBIx::Class::ResultSet/search> family of
+In conditions (e.g. C<\%cond> in the L<DBIx::Class::ResultSet/search> family of
 methods) you cannot directly use array references (since this is interpreted as
 a list of values to be C<OR>ed), but you can use the following syntax to force
 passing them as bind values: