X-Git-Url: http://git.shadowcat.co.uk/gitweb/gitweb.cgi?a=blobdiff_plain;f=lib%2FCatalyst%2FManual%2FTutorial%2F03_MoreCatalystBasics.pod;h=c9b6f4d87d94decf9d897ae279f0424bcd6afd26;hb=be3349e1a2966ee8abc15c1b9a168a3c70125ccb;hp=da416ff981d14eccdd1d5bdc929724017a96b532;hpb=69d57cda557b2f9a04a058dfd4e875c1d9153133;p=catagits%2FCatalyst-Manual.git

diff --git a/lib/Catalyst/Manual/Tutorial/03_MoreCatalystBasics.pod b/lib/Catalyst/Manual/Tutorial/03_MoreCatalystBasics.pod
index da416ff..c9b6f4d 100644
--- a/lib/Catalyst/Manual/Tutorial/03_MoreCatalystBasics.pod
+++ b/lib/Catalyst/Manual/Tutorial/03_MoreCatalystBasics.pod
@@ -881,9 +881,9 @@ L<DBIx::Class::Schema::Loader> version C<0.05000> or later.
 =head1 ENABLE THE MODEL IN THE CONTROLLER
 
 Open C<lib/MyApp/Controller/Books.pm> and un-comment the model code we
-left disabled earlier so that your version matches the following (un-
-comment the line containing C<[$c-E<gt>model('DB::Book')-E<gt>all]> and
-delete the next 2 lines):
+left disabled earlier so that your version matches the following
+(un-comment the line containing C<[$c-E<gt>model('DB::Book')-E<gt>all]>
+and delete the next 2 lines):
 
     =head2 list
     
@@ -1381,7 +1381,7 @@ alternate way to specify the trace option just in case):
     $ DBIC_TRACE=1 script/myapp_server.pl -r
 
 Make sure that the application loads correctly and that you see the
-three dynamically created model class (one for each of the Result
+three dynamically created model classes (one for each of the Result
 Classes we created).
 
 Then hit the URL L<http://localhost:3000/books/list> with your browser
@@ -1461,11 +1461,11 @@ html" at the end of every field where a user has control over the
 information that can appear in that field (and can therefore inject
 markup or code if you don't "neutralize" those fields).  In addition to
 "| html", Template Toolkit has a variety of other useful filters that
-can found in the documentation for L<Template::Filters>.  (While we are
-on the topic of security and escaping of dangerous values, one of the
-advantages of using tools like DBIC for database access or
+can be found in the documentation for L<Template::Filters>.  (While we
+are on the topic of security and escaping of dangerous values, one of
+the advantages of using tools like DBIC for database access or
 L<HTML::FormFu> for form management [see
-L<Chapter 9|Catalyst::Manual::Tutorial::09_AdvancedCRUD::09_FormFu>
+L<Chapter 9|Catalyst::Manual::Tutorial::09_AdvancedCRUD::09_FormFu>]
 is that they automatically handle most escaping for you and therefore
 dramatically increase the security of your app.)
 
@@ -1474,7 +1474,7 @@ dramatically increase the security of your app.)
 
 In some situations, it can be useful to run your application and display
 a page without using a browser.  Catalyst lets you do this using the
-C<scripts/myapp_test.pl> script.  Just supply the URL you wish to
+C<script/myapp_test.pl> script.  Just supply the URL you wish to
 display and it will run that request through the normal controller
 dispatch logic and use the appropriate view to render the output
 (obviously, complex pages may dump a lot of text to your terminal
@@ -1619,12 +1619,12 @@ C<$c-E<gt>stash-E<gt>{template}> line has changed):
 You should now be able to access the L<http://localhost:3000/books/list>
 URL as before.
 
-B<NOTE:> Please note that if you use the default template technique, you
+B<NOTE:> If you use the default template technique, you
 will B<not> be able to use either the C<$c-E<gt>forward> or the
 C<$c-E<gt>detach> mechanisms (these are discussed in Chapter 2 and
 Chapter 9 of the Tutorial).
 
-B<IMPORTANT:> Make sure that you do NOT skip the following section
+B<IMPORTANT:> Make sure that you do B<not> skip the following section
 before continuing to the next chapter 4 Basic CRUD.