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diff --git a/Artistic b/Artistic
index a27fd48..5f22124 100644
--- a/Artistic
+++ b/Artistic
@@ -97,7 +97,7 @@ interpreter is so embedded.
 
 6. The scripts and library files supplied as input to or produced as
 output from the programs of this Package do not automatically fall
-under the copyright of this Package, but belong to whomever generated
+under the copyright of this Package, but belong to whoever generated
 them, and may be sold commercially, and may be aggregated with this
 Package.  If such scripts or library files are aggregated with this
 Package via the so-called "undump" or "unexec" methods of producing a
@@ -115,10 +115,16 @@ equivalent of input as in Paragraph 6, provided these subroutines do
 not change the language in any way that would cause it to fail the
 regression tests for the language.
 
-8. The name of the Copyright Holder may not be used to endorse or promote
+8. Aggregation of this Package with a commercial distribution is always
+permitted provided that the use of this Package is embedded; that is,
+when no overt attempt is made to make this Package's interfaces visible
+to the end user of the commercial distribution.  Such use shall not be
+construed as a distribution of this Package.
+
+9. The name of the Copyright Holder may not be used to endorse or promote
 products derived from this software without specific prior written permission.
 
-9. THIS PACKAGE IS PROVIDED "AS IS" AND WITHOUT ANY EXPRESS OR
+10. THIS PACKAGE IS PROVIDED "AS IS" AND WITHOUT ANY EXPRESS OR
 IMPLIED WARRANTIES, INCLUDING, WITHOUT LIMITATION, THE IMPLIED
 WARRANTIES OF MERCHANTIBILITY AND FITNESS FOR A PARTICULAR PURPOSE.