updated instructions to only give checkout instructions for reference impl of tutoria...

[catagits/Catalyst-Runtime.git] / lib / Catalyst / Manual / Tutorial / BasicCRUD.pod

diff --git a/lib/Catalyst/Manual/Tutorial/BasicCRUD.pod b/lib/Catalyst/Manual/Tutorial/BasicCRUD.pod
index d6e0952..b066395 100644 (file)
--- a/lib/Catalyst/Manual/Tutorial/BasicCRUD.pod
+++ b/lib/Catalyst/Manual/Tutorial/BasicCRUD.pod
@@ -63,12 +63,9 @@ focus on the Create and Delete aspects of CRUD.  More advanced
 capabilities, including full Update functionality, will be addressed in
 Part 8.
 
-B<TIP>: Note that all of the code for this part of the tutorial can be
-pulled from the Catalyst Subversion repository in one step with the
-following command:
-
-    svn co http://dev.catalyst.perl.org/repos/Catalyst/tags/examples/Tutorial/5.7X/BasicCRUD MyApp
-
+You can checkout the source code for this example from the catalyst
+subversion repository as per the instructions in
+L<Catalyst::Manual::Tutorial::Intro>
 
 =head1 FORMLESS SUBMISSION
 
@@ -318,7 +315,7 @@ Part 8.
 
 =head1 A SIMPLE DELETE FEATURE
 
-Turning out attention to the delete portion of CRUD, this section
+Turning our attention to the delete portion of CRUD, this section
 illustrates some basic techniques that can be used to remove information
 from the database.
 
@@ -347,13 +344,16 @@ and 2) the four lines for the Delete link near the bottom).
         <td>
           [% # First initialize a TT variable to hold a list.  Then use a TT FOREACH -%]
           [% # loop in 'side effect notation' to load just the last names of the     -%]
-          [% # authors into the list.  Note that we are making a bogus assignment to -%]
-          [% # the 'xx' vbl to avoid printing the size of the list after each push.  -%]
+          [% # authors into the list.  Note that the 'push' TT vmethod does not      -%]
+          [% # a value, so nothing will be printed here.  But, if you have something -%]
+          [% # in TT that does return a method and you don't want it printed, you    -%]
+          [% # can: 1) assign it to a bogus value, or 2) use the CALL keyword to     -%]
+          [% # call it and discard the return value.                                 -%]
           [% tt_authors = [ ];
-             xx = tt_authors.push(author.last_name) FOREACH author = book.authors %]
+             tt_authors.push(author.last_name) FOREACH author = book.authors %]
           [% # Now use a TT 'virtual method' to display the author count             -%]
           ([% tt_authors.size %])
-          [% # Use another TT virtual method to join the names with comma separators -%]
+          [% # Use another TT vmethod to join & print the names & comma separators   -%]
           [% tt_authors.join(', ') %]
         </td>
         <td>